Walt:use our 5 senses to describe our writing. friday 19th june.
Sun city.
One day two explorers discovered a city that was abandoned and overgrown.they named the overgrown place sun city. animals use it as a home. But the jaguars were starving and they smelt the explorers blood. the explorers didn't know but . The jaguars started growling and running to the explorers.The explorers ran for their life but they never came back to sun city.when the explorers got home the Jaguar City they told their friends about sun city and the Escape from a Jaguar. The end
good writing simon real good writing.
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